"The following story written by a grade 2/3 student in October demonstrates an understanding of engagement, richness of word pictures, emotions and feelings."

I Love the Peas By Sienna

The garden is the most favorite place to be. It is really nice. It is colorful. The potatoes are brown and the carrots have green stems. The best part is the peas. I love peas. They are just about ripe and juicy. There must be two hundred vegetables in the garden. The garden smells like a mint.The deer like my garden too. They like to come and take the vegetables. Just like me they like the peas the best. I like to watch the deer. They are beautiful animals. I still wish they would leave the peas for me. The deer finally left my garden alone and I was able to pick the vegetables.

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